Order Only: Private Message to Remus

[alt_sirius]

Have you packed in yet?

I think I've got a draft worth reading (finally). Unless you're too knackered? I'd like to finish it tonight if I can do.

It's not very fiery but I think it hits the strong points.

There's a section - I want to make sure it gets to what Alice and I were talking about, the manifesto of sorts.

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[alt_lupin]

I'm still up. I don't mind taking a look.

[alt_lupin]

(I find it hilarious that you don't want to be in the room while I read this thing you're planning to show to the entire Protectorate.)

Okay. I think this is really good. The one thing is, I keep thinking about how Aurora Sinistra immediately wanted to know if Pomona and Poppy were with Dogstar, because that's the one ORGANISATION she's actually heard of. I wonder if we should make up a name for the organisation -- I mean obviously you wouldn't want to say, 'I'm with the Order of the Phoenix,' but we could be the Siblinghood of East Chelsea in public if only that didn't lack for a certain gravitas.

You could say that these are the things the Siblinghood stands for. Rather than just you. It might be a good thing if people had a sense that there was a MOVEMENT out there. Of course, that means MLE would also have that sense...but surely it wouldn't tell them any more than they already know, provided you didn't go listing out our major projects. Because surely they suspect you have allies, but you could also just as easily be lying.

I suppose we should discuss that with the full Order before you go putting it in a Grim Truth, even under an assumed identity.