alt_sirius: (Shocked)
Sirius Black ([personal profile] alt_sirius) wrote2013-01-22 10:38 pm

Order Only: Private Message to Remus

Have you packed in yet?

I think I've got a draft worth reading (finally). Unless you're too knackered? I'd like to finish it tonight if I can do.

It's not very fiery but I think it hits the strong points.

There's a section - I want to make sure it gets to what Alice and I were talking about, the manifesto of sorts.
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[personal profile] alt_lupin 2013-01-23 06:04 am (UTC)(link)
And 'those who join me' suggests you're trying to form an organisation. I think it would be good to make it clear this organisation exists.

Maybe some play on the idea of a Council.
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[personal profile] alt_lupin 2013-01-23 06:09 am (UTC)(link)
Well, if you don't think you can put that bit in without asking everyone else in the Order, then by all means leave it out.

I think you should get this up tonight, one way or the other (and then come to bed).
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[personal profile] alt_lupin 2013-01-23 06:16 am (UTC)(link)
'The right to go about one's business without fear of becoming the victim of random violence'